by Christina Nov 17, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I remember when you said that you would always be true. |
Ok ur poem is kinda...jumpy...it doesnt have a good flow...maybe tahts cuz u rhymed some of it then you dont...it kinda sounds like you're puttin random things in the poem...im not tryin to be mean..i just want you to practice on flow first...other tahn that it was good |