This Angel Is About To Fall

by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-   Nov 18, 2006


This broken angel is about to fall
No longer will she live
She can not take the pain of life
She has nothing more to give

This broken angel is about to fall
No more lies to cover her arms
No more wishing to be dead
With only her self harm

This broken angel is about to fall
With a tormented, broken heart
The ones that she once called her friends
Left her alone when she fell apart

This broken angel is about to fall
With vicious rumors all around
Love with just a touch of red
As the angel hits the ground

The broken angel forever at rest
But nobody notices shes not there
Only the angel knows why this is
Its cause nobody ever cared

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~She Died Screaming

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  • 18 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    +.+ Well you already know, I think your an amazing poet +.+

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this!
    I liked the repetition used.
    My favourite part was the last stanza, I thought it was very hard hitting.
    A wonderful write.

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Excellent! I love it! I'm definitally adding you to my favorites! I love these type of stories with angels. I usually choose which stanzas I love the best, but I cannot choose! I love every word and every line!

    Excellent
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by donna

    An excellently written poem, very sad but flowed brilliantly.. Well done 5/5 xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily

    This poem really talks about what im going through everyday.. really good
    I like it
    Keep writing.

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