"Everyday I miss you more,
I need you here with me.
This pain we feel I know is wrong,
Wont you come back to me?"

My heart ached after reading this. Its just so sad, i hate the thought of people like you who have so much to offer going through something like this.
I truly hope things get better soon! You deserve a little happiness.
5/5 as always hun
*Gem*

Its amazing! I like it a lot!

That's deeply sad. there's lov till the end. the ending is full of regrets. it made me cry. good job:)

Wow this is an amazing poem, i hate to see that somebody is feeling this way when they have so much to offer, i do hope that it all gets better for you soon hun!

=]=]=]=]

~*~Jen~*~

Thanks for all the lovely comments and I really love this poem. It's so very well written and many people could relate to it. Great job 5/5 =]
Much Love,
Rayne xx

Hey! I sent you an e-mail so you have to go read it...NOW! LOL! I sent you a pic too...it's a really bad one but please let me know what you think anyway...well, I will talk to you later...and I'm sorry I have to shut that e-mail down...but I'll get another. well, buh-bye!
Burning~Wings

Awwwwwww!!! that is so sad and sweet!!!!!

xx

This poem makes me want to cry, I wish I can get into your love poem section but this damn filter is on my computer. Anyways very good poem!