Since That Summer

by Katlynn   Nov 18, 2006


The heart is pounding more.
the aching of fear inside of her.
the pain is getting out of her.
she's laying on her bed with tears.
with her pillow between the sheets.
resting her head upon it.

he broke it inside of her.
the wishing that it wouldn't happen.
he wanted something else.
she wasn't good enough.
she can't make herself tough.
so he said to bad.

the room is dark with no light.
only when traffic comes around.
not making one sound.
she hits the ground.
with her body bleeding out.

she couldn't be without him.
she fell in love with him.
and died with a gun beside her.
not beside him.
she fell and the gun pulled.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Now this is a great poem! Some grammer mistakes, but thats alright. I loved your last stanza, your emotion is really strong. Great job Babe!

    Excellent
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by *Isolde*

    Wow another great poem of yours.5/5 keep it coming.

  • 18 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    This was really good. Tragid story created in it, but you expressed it well in this poem. Watch out for repitition of words, but apart from that, good job. =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Another great job of urs it nicely written and this was such a great poem very interesting...

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww.. that is such a sad poem. You described everything in this very well.. I could picture all of it. It seems very well thought out. My absolute favorite lines were:
    and died with a gun beside her.
    not beside him.
    she fell and the gun pulled.
    I loved those. Amazingly written! 5/5

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