A tragic story in poetic form. I liked this, it was sad without being too cliche etc.
I liked how you suggested a broken heart in stanza 2, but didn't actually say it, it worked well.
The twist in the last stanza was also good with her laying with a gun instead of him.
However, the last line of the final stanza didn't make complete sense to me and I feel it could be worded better, maybe... "she fell and pulled the trigger?"
Also, on the last line of the second stanza, it should be "too bad."
Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed this touching and saddening write.

Aww.. that is such a sad poem. You described everything in this very well.. I could picture all of it. It seems very well thought out. My absolute favorite lines were:
and died with a gun beside her.
not beside him.
she fell and the gun pulled.
I loved those. Amazingly written! 5/5

Another great job of urs it nicely written and this was such a great poem very interesting...

This was really good. Tragid story created in it, but you expressed it well in this poem. Watch out for repitition of words, but apart from that, good job. =]

Wow another great poem of yours.5/5 keep it coming.

Now this is a great poem! Some grammer mistakes, but thats alright. I loved your last stanza, your emotion is really strong. Great job Babe!

Excellent
5/5