Jess has a good point but i have to admit the words you did use flowed brilliantly, the whole poem had a great rhythem to it.
It had a great message with it too.
Well done!!
5/5
*Gem*

Awe...its true though. good job =] 5/5

First of all I would like to say that this poem was obviously heartfelt and written from experience. It has a very good rhyme scheme. If I were editing this poem the first thing I would do is correct the typo and face this wold on your own and face this world on your own
Understand that no ones there Understand that no one's there
The line If you keep to continue that would sound better if it were if you keep on behaving like that
Another honing technique is to remove as many ands as you can

Have you searched this world,
To see beyond your fears?
Understand that no one's there,
They won't always catch your tears.

Putting on an act won't help you,
It won't get you anywhere at all.
Crying and lying isn't doing well,
who's going to break your fall?

Get yourself back up again,
and face this world on your own.
For you know why you've cried,
leaving answers to be unknown.

Times will get hard in life,
but you can't blame everyone else.
If you keep on behaving like that,
you'll end up all by yourself.

Sorry if what I said hurt,
but you know you hurt me too.
Worse than you could imagine,
I was put down by you.

Get over the long past,
you need to move on in life.
If you let everything get to you,
you'll never know wrong and right.

Amazing poem!
very very true...
yes sometimes friendship ends, but we do have to get back up and face the world on our own...

i love the last stanza

"Get over the long past,
and just move on in life.
If you let everything get to you,
you'll never know wrong and right"

keep it up!

This was a very heartfelt poem, it showed lots of emotion.. The rhythm and flow was really good. I especially liked the last stanza.. Well done 5/5 xx

Well, this was a very different 'friendship' poem. Seemed like you were lecturing someone who went through a rough time. Most of the 'friendship' poems I read are dedications, so it was good that this one was different. It was good, unique, so I'll give you that.

This was very good. Very emotional. I agree that it's not your typical friendship poem. It seemed like you were trying to show somebody the right way to go in life. Very interesting.

Good write.

I think this is probably the best poem i have ever read your really good at writing

Good job. This was more of a statement poem. It was almost teaching a lesson. If you could make that into a more creative way by adding metaphors, that would be good. Overall I like it and I agree with the content. You may want to check your grammar.

Hmm. It kinda confused me with the words. I got the impression that you have just lost a friend, and they're being a jerk. You're not there for them now, so you're telling them that you're not going to help them...? That's just a guess lol. Hope it's not too embarassing if it's wrong. xD

The flow was good. I didn't think it was forced at all. But the rhymes were cliche. Everyone uses them. I didn't think that you tried very hard on the rhyming scheme, and please don't take that personally. I just think you can do a lot better than those rhymes. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

This was an excellent poem, about strength and courage.You were surely telling someone, quit whining. I like it just for the self esteem you shared,
cause life is hard 5

I thought this was a good poem, with a good point to it. The only stanza I felt didn't quite match up to the rest was the 2nd to last one. I just don't think it had the strength the others did. But overall, it was good.
Charisma*

A brilliant piece of work! Reminds me of a girl I once knew! Really gets to the point hard and fast!

Nice. I liked it but it wasn't the best I've seen.

Very well written. I very much enjoyed reading this! I look forward to the next one!
Mike

This poem really means someting to anybody who had freindship problems. It was really good and I liked it.

Stay Playa,
SC

Wow.. That was pretty powerful. I loved it. Keep up the excellent work.

5/5 excellent.

your poems are amazing. you have such great wording and rhyme skemes. You can really pull a poem together. It all flows so nicely. I love your writing.. =]