Bright Eyes

by Bogie   Nov 18, 2006


Bright eyes full of life sparkle with love
Sexy girl soft and sweet from above
Beautiful body moving graceful
Elegant essence of an angel
As your fragrance starts to transpire
My hearts desire burns with fire
A passionate glare longing a stare
In your eyes so beautiful and rare

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  • 17 years ago

    by tara

    Most of the time i don't have it that much with love poems but this one i like.
    i even smiled when i read it it kind of happy like a big compliment.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammy

    That was absolutely beautiful. You must be quite the romantic :)

    Awesome write!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Corinne

    Some lovely lines here - Beware of tired rhymes of "love" and "above" - Neither "glare" nor "stare" are words I wouldn't use when looking at someone I love - "Gaze" comes to mind

  • 17 years ago

    by Noelle Wright

    AWHH this poem is so sweet i wish a guy would write something like this for me! I'm so jealous of who ever this was too or inspired it ! haha

    Noelle

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    I don't prefer love poetry but this one is greatly written. Interesting rhyming and very good atmosphere. I like first line the most.
    5/5

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