I love poems that make me think and this sure made me think lol.. I love poems that express feelings and thoughts in a different way.. This confused me at first but I really liked the poem and how You expressed your feelings, and how the cup of tea washed away your thoughts.. Very well done Goran 5/5 xx

I commented on this poem already, but I noticed that you have deleted it. I didn't leave a bad comment or anything and I even liked the poem and I gave you a 5/5. So why did you delete my comment? Was it because I said that I didn't think that it was your best? If so I am sorry if that upset you and I promise to never comment on your poems again if my being truthful upset you. I also noticed that after I left that comment that someone downvoted my new poem really low. I don't like to make assumptions, but if it was you, I just want to let you know that it really dosen't matter to me, because I prefer honesty above anything. I thought that you were a magnificent poet, but you have to learn to take the bitter with the sweet.

Your ex-friend
Letty

Letty, if u have noticed, i had 6 comments when u commented my poem, and i really appriciate ur comment, also, by now u should know this, WE CAN NOT DELECTE COMMENT...

what was it, i got a stupid comment from a friend FRESHTA, who wrote something about my personal life, which i didnt want to share with others so i had to delete the poem and re-post it.i really appoligize for that, and as ur downvoting go, trust me i will never do anything like this to u or to anyone else.i dont know why u call me ur E-Friend when i really appriciate ur friendship?

Hey Goran,
thank you for deleting the poem because of my comment, wow. i cant believe it, sorry for what I wrote, I never knew it was too personal, but the truth is I felt your pain and I wrote it here. plese forgive me...
all i will say is I hope everyone knew your pain like i do, how destiny did u unfair, the true emotion behind your each word, as you write each word there is a true teardrop behind it....

sorry again if i had hurt you, but it was because your poem made me cry.....

Hmm interesting, I'm not sure either. I'm not sure if you're talking literally or not but I'm somewhat confused.
It was this area that threw me off "Carelessly,
Knocked on the door of my thoughts."
Maybe rewording is needed here.
It's just breaks the poem up and makes it confusing. I want to know what the tea symbolises because it seems to wash away your feelings and leave them somewhere you don't know. Also, in the line "never found there way home" it should be "their."
Thanks for sharing.

Very very creative. I love the bird and the cup of tea theme. This is one of your best.

I like it! its different... i d0nt kn0w what else t0 say apart fr0m its fabul0us! great j0b!! l0ve maddy x0ox

Umm as I said dude love poems who makes me think and I love this one, I love how you point out the feelings without saying it exactly...this is the first time i read poem like this from you..... very nice job greatly written.. Dude I want you to write more like this one such a brain booster lols hehehe really great nice job!!!! 5/5 a 100% true feelings put in here!!! xD

Hi
I believe this is one of your best poems...i personally love it..it has a different message than all your other poem...for some reason all your old poem has one thing in commen and that was they carried the same massage but this one is different...it is very creative and fantasy like...which i why i love it....its just like an ideal poem...a cup of tea...and birds flying..it was faboulous.....i love it
wish u all t he best....

This poem flowed a freely as your thoughts, and was very refreshing.5>>>>>

Hmm, I found this a little confusing. Try adding a little more detail to explain a little more what you are trying to say. Still, I liked the metaphors you used, they were quite effective. Lastly, I did not like how you kept repeating the word "poem" it messed up the flow for me. Nicely done though Goran. Ooh, and one more thing, could you think of a better title. This one is good but it makes me think more of a funny poem. 5/5

Great imagery, its great! The line with the ! point threw me off a little though.

This is a good poem and is different then most poems I have read. And I totally understand it. It is wonderful. 5/5

Now alone
Even not the cup of tea
Not anymore!!!
Are the birds still alive

This is great, I am sure they are alive,so pour another cup of tea and call her, I bet your birds are well kept.
VERY GOOD POEM5

That is a truely amazing poem. They are random things to put together like that, but they all fitted together perfectly. I can't pick a favorite part of this poem, as i love it all.. One of my favorites from you. Excellent, excellent write Goran. =] 5/5 Because you deserve no less.

Tammie

Love the title and especially this line

"I was awake,
As an incomplete poem
Carelessly,
Knocked on the door of my thoughts"

Beautiful use of words!!!!