Honestly, let's be honest.

by deeesem   Nov 18, 2006


I find your honesty attractive,
It gets my breadstick erect,
Honestly, honesty,
Just seems to have that effect.

You saying that you like me,
Is far more important than someone elses "I love you",
Because honestly, your honesty lets me know that...
You actually do.

When I ask you if I look alright,
I really want to know,
Dont give me a sugar-coated answer,
Even if I look as ugly as my uncles manky toe.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Pipp

    I liked that a lot although honestly i don't get what it was about? Keep writing your work is great =]

    Pip xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Nice job on it. It really made me laugh. I like the title of it. =] It confused me when I read it at firt. Hahaz. I think you should have added a little more to the ending, though. I thought you ended it a little, empty. Nice job though. 4/5

    >black&&blue

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Haha this was FANTASTIC. After reading the other one of yours I'd almost lost faith, but this one brought it right back up again!
    I loved the honesty of it and the humour too. The second line made me laugh out loud, it did, so did the final line.
    Nicely done, keep it up.

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