Haha this was FANTASTIC. After reading the other one of yours I'd almost lost faith, but this one brought it right back up again!
I loved the honesty of it and the humour too. The second line made me laugh out loud, it did, so did the final line.
Nicely done, keep it up.

Nice job on it. It really made me laugh. I like the title of it. =] It confused me when I read it at firt. Hahaz. I think you should have added a little more to the ending, though. I thought you ended it a little, empty. Nice job though. 4/5

>black&&blue

I liked that a lot although honestly i don't get what it was about? Keep writing your work is great =]

Pip xxx