Lovely penned within beautiful emotions you potray here, simply yet so heartfelt....well done!

Wow great poem "I'd love to enter into that place
Find myself in love's embrace
But not right now, another day
I'm dodging bullets I'd love to take"

that was my favorite part to me it sumed it up good ..well great job once again keep it up

I can't find anything wrong with this one at all! Apart from a few glitches i had when reading it aloud because i got my rhythem mixed up, it was perfect.
I especially liked how you replaced questions with bulltets.
It symbolised how questions can seem to be shot at you with at an alarming rate =)
Excellent piece
5/5
Gem and Tara

This is very good, i loved the symbalism in the poem. 5/5!!!

Wow.. great symbolism.. amazing flow and rhyme.. strong emotions.. great poem.. i love it! keep up the great Work!!!