Untitled(Eternal Forbidden Nocturnal Romance)

by Crimson Moon   Nov 18, 2006


In this cold winter night
The fog kills the moonlight
And the mysterious black mourning stars
Have lost their shine
But now,
When the dark stabs everything with its darts
And the moon rains red wine
I am thine bride...
To thee I cede my life

Many tears I cried
Since the day you died
From the land of the Death near me you were sent
And this magic moment will never end

Now shadows surround us
Trying to stop the spell
But they have no chance
Cause their beloved god
In eternal dark fell

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cooper

    Huh, different use of words...but still very good. I also read 'Untitled 2'...seeing as how this poem was good enough to make me read more of what you've got.
    Good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nyx

    Hmm never heard of black mourning stars but when all is dark they might be there.. i wonder-well done

  • 18 years ago

    by Jemma

    Wow - that is so different - just incredible - the imagery, the language... love 'mourning stars' and 'in eternal dark fell'.

    thanks for your comment
    jem