Wow - that is so different - just incredible - the imagery, the language... love 'mourning stars' and 'in eternal dark fell'.

thanks for your comment
jem

Hmm never heard of black mourning stars but when all is dark they might be there.. i wonder-well done

Huh, different use of words...but still very good. I also read 'Untitled 2'...seeing as how this poem was good enough to make me read more of what you've got.
Good job.