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by MisticalMisty. Nov 18, 2006 category : Love, romance / i love you
When i look into your eyes. its like the whole worlds still. nothing can stop me from loving you. and nothin ever will. Your like that dream guy every girl wishes for ever night. And being with you is oh so right Your like my other half. The half that makes me whole. And your the reason why my smile... its so not dull. I love you with all my heart. And thats never going to change. And being with you has made me change. But not for the bad all for the good. So hold me close and never let me go. Cuzz sweetie I Love You more than you know.
by kitkat girl
Good poem. a few suggestions: fifth line, when you say ever, do you mean every? eighth line, you put it's so not dull, do you mean it's not so dull? ninth line, change wiht to with. Really good poem. peace anna soffe