Some days

by The Angel of Secrets   Nov 18, 2006


Some days I just feel like I want to cry,
other days I want to lay down and die.
Just fall down as every tear that dropped,
Knowing the finally hurting stopped.
Maybe someone would miss me, maybe not.
Maybe they'll remember me, or I'll be forgot.
Give it all up, my writing, it all,
Stand at the edge of the cliff, waiting to fall.
Falling down, feel the wind in my hair,
Flying among the clouds, into the air.
I wish I could fly away, into the sky,
Leaving the world, saying goodbye.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Wow, this was really sad, a very emotionally moving piece.
    I enjoyed the rhyme scheme muchly, and I thought the flow was good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    Aww hun! That is really sad. I hope your alright, we haven't talked in a while. =[ Well.. for the poem, i think its great. It expresses heaps of emotion and is well written. And don't you worry, you wouldn't be forgotten if you went away. I would miss you & never forget you! But it won't be happening, so don't even think about it. Hehe. I'm here to talk when we can. =] Love ya hun.

    Tammie xo

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