Aww hun! That is really sad. I hope your alright, we haven't talked in a while. =[ Well.. for the poem, i think its great. It expresses heaps of emotion and is well written. And don't you worry, you wouldn't be forgotten if you went away. I would miss you & never forget you! But it won't be happening, so don't even think about it. Hehe. I'm here to talk when we can. =] Love ya hun.

Tammie xo

Wow, this was really sad, a very emotionally moving piece.
I enjoyed the rhyme scheme muchly, and I thought the flow was good.