I am still new at this, so any comments could really help. Thanks in advance.

Omg, i almost cried reading the two love poems for viviana! God they were so powerful, so sweet, so sinsere! Wow that takes a lot of guts to say those things and to make a poem it even sweeter!! Great poem! I also read the promise one i liked that one alot too! Ur a great poet! I use to write a lot of poems, but i delete all them expect one because i don't think i am good enough to write! So i think i should stop but ur a an alsome writer keep it up!!!
ALways, Lyssa

This is terrific too!! So beauitful and sweet! Great job!!

Amy