by crazyandsweet Nov 19, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
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Eyes that shine like a new dime |
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Yet another wonderful peice by you. The flow, structure and the rhyming scheme where all greatly done. You have talent. Keep up the good work. |
by donna
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Very nicely written poem Hun.. the rhythm was good and it flowed nicely too.. well done 5/5 xx |