Hmm.. An intresting read. i dont know but i feel as thought this has something missing.. though i do think that the secound stanza has quite a bit of truth in it. I mean you've got a point, nothing stays beautiful physically. I liked that bit about the poem. The first stanza just made me think, this is a different poem. Yet i liked it because of the secound stanza. Keep writing! xx

I liked this! it was a different view of beauty. it was really refreshing to read such a unique piece. the vocab was brilliant. well done hun. keep it up.
Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.