There's some real creativity in this poem! (shocking, i know.) But seriously:

"The words remind me of a story

(A story I once burned,
The cells in my brain,
Smelt of ash)."

That is sweet, poetical joy, right there.

The "Twas" is a little lumpy, to me, since it's a contraction of "it was." Maybe if you had some punctuation ending the line before, it wouldn't be bad. But that's just being really picky. Great poem, seriously

I think this is brilliant

Wow this poem is amazing. you did a really great job on writing it. keep up the great work. 5/5

~Kristina

I would like to voice my admiration for this piece of writing. It is unlike anything I have read on this site, or amongst my own writings for a very long time. A melancholic tradegy of the human mind, it in itself a dejected and nostalgic performance...

I am left with an unsettling yet familiar feeling after reading this exceptional write.

Best Wishes

5/5