Comments : Harmless Wishes

  • 17 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    +.+ I'm glad your past your bad days. :) +.+

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Very dark for your work....on poems like these I hate saying there good because you don't want to encourage such thoughts, but you are usually so upbeat and happy and it was well-written. LOL am I making any sense? hope you understand me...lol
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Jen

    I loved reading this one it makes so much sense and the rhyming scheme is great too =]=]=]=]
    ~*~Jen~*~

  • 17 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Wow i liked it b/c if u think about we all have days we could just go invisible and die i loved how u worded it, keep up the good work 5/5 always
    Kate~

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This one is damn too haunting, i mean the last stanza is just too much....made me breathless...ur bad days are really dangerous...stay away from them

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelly

    Very very dark. Um the poem is good, well excellent actually! It made me frown though, its such a selfish thing to do and hits too close to the bone for me (not that i have ever tried to take my own life). There is a lot of emotions there but i cant fault the poem is anyway. Another remarkable write. Worth another 5/5.

    Kelly
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Wooww such a different mood form all ur normal poems but we all have those days still it has so much mystery and it was very deep..

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Wow that was so different to other poems ive read of yours. very wel written but. very powerful!!