+.+ I'm glad your past your bad days. :) +.+ |
by *Charisma*
Very dark for your work....on poems like these I hate saying there good because you don't want to encourage such thoughts, but you are usually so upbeat and happy and it was well-written. LOL am I making any sense? hope you understand me...lol |
by Jen
I loved reading this one it makes so much sense and the rhyming scheme is great too =]=]=]=] |
Wow i liked it b/c if u think about we all have days we could just go invisible and die i loved how u worded it, keep up the good work 5/5 always |
This one is damn too haunting, i mean the last stanza is just too much....made me breathless...ur bad days are really dangerous...stay away from them |
by Kelly
Very very dark. Um the poem is good, well excellent actually! It made me frown though, its such a selfish thing to do and hits too close to the bone for me (not that i have ever tried to take my own life). There is a lot of emotions there but i cant fault the poem is anyway. Another remarkable write. Worth another 5/5. |
Wooww such a different mood form all ur normal poems but we all have those days still it has so much mystery and it was very deep.. |
by dora
Wow that was so different to other poems ive read of yours. very wel written but. very powerful!! |