+.+ Sounds like you had trouble sleeping. lol +.+

Not one of your best, but very sweet!

Nothing ever seems to work
I'll just have to wait it out
The time will pass, the sun will rise
Of that I have no doubt

I liked that stanza and the line about 'counting countless sheep.' it was a cute poem! Love your stuff!
Charisma*

Very cute poem to write so late at night lol 5/5 nice job

Its so true... heheheee I stayed up the other night thinking about someone...lol.... Anyways it was great but you always hear that from me 5/5

sincerely,
Katlyn

I bet u past out after that poem... i know i do when i seen 2 let out my thoughts... secret of sleeping iz get ur mind blank and ull pass out lol try it :P u may start seeing stuff but yet ur not thinking... iz kinda kool because ull get 2 control it one day :P sleep in class all the time

GReat poem showed how when ur in love all u can think about is life spent with them :)

5/5

Peace
Anthony

Awww bless you havin trouble sleeping,
and do i need to guess who this is about? *grins* lol!
Nice poem hun!
xXxJenxXx

Wow. Just sounds like me. I love that poem. So nicely worded and wonderfully put together. Thank you so much for your comment; really appreciated =) 5/5.
Much love, Emma xox

This is a cute poem :)
i really like it

I like this! I've read a few of your other stuff too very talented nice 1!

I think i'll go insane...ur last poem which i just read..."harmless wishes" & now this one.....this one is just so romantic....u really seems to be missing ur chair a lot.....stay in love forever..very nicely written indeed

all the best and take care

Ahha nice and i kno w the feeling, so hard ot put it into words...oh one question do you care a notbook around with you wherever you go>> just wonderng bc i do lol lol :)

lissa

Hey darl this was really go0d. i think the best poems are written at such early hours =p well done xx

"It's just a game of patience
A lesson I need to do
Cos when the nights completed
My reward is seeing you!"

I loved this stanza! And it was at 2 am? WOW! This is great!
xoxo

I feel like this all the time.... great poem!!

Ahh been there many countless times, but i was waiting for my friend to call me, usually around 2 is when she get off from work and i be the first one to talk to...at times she would call me knowing i be asleep and wake me up. lol good times they were.

but waiting for that one person, does seem like an eternity and doesn't help that time is against you, making it drag on forever. but when it pays off in the end, getting to see that one person who'd you stayed up so late to see.

well you said you tried almost everything to sleep. well should have tried drinking night quil. that works fine on me, knocks me out before i know it. lol kidding of course about drinking night quil.

excellent poem here, i know there are many ppl out there that has encounter this situation.
5/5

That was kinda tight mama... i was feelin the intro the most. seems like you ended it on a quick note though, like you had more to tell. but i donno.. still a good write. 5/5

I really enjoyed this poem.. definately shared some of the same emotion at one point..
good job!