Wow, such a good poem and sad, keep up the good work!
-steven

This poem is so good. I wish I could write like that. You're crazy good at writing.

Pamela :)

Your work is great!! This is very unique

"silent moans,
weeping soft,
tears rolling,
greiving loss."

This is one of those topics that isnt always the easiest to write about, but you pulled it off excellently. Its sad that the oppurtunity is even there to write about these kind of things. But your words ring true and hopefully everyone else can see that too.

Take Care.