AMAZing. it so deep of lov. wow, u must really lov this person. i never seen someone who work so hard to get back. keep writing:)

Omg! This is such a sad poem! I mean I knew what you were going through had to be bad, but this poem says everything..what happened, how you're feeling! It's an amazing poem but I just have to say...you can not kill yourself. I don't know if you just put it because it's how you're feeling or you really will. But please please please don't do anything to hurt yourself! please I will cry if you do and I'm so not just saying that! Believe me! I will! :'-( I know we don't really know eachother but in a way I feel like I kinda do know you which will hurt me even more if you do anything! I do care about you!
I have to go now but I will talk to you later okay...buh-bye!
Burning~Wings

Wow another moving piece. You put so much emotion in to your poems which leaves the reader absolutely stunned. I loved this one too - just like i love the rest.

Kelly
xx

Xcellent poem, and I am saying this because of your comment, but thank you 4 it. I like this poem because it's so deep, sad, and full of heartfelt emotions. To be honest I can relate.
thanks again

Another bittersweet and heartache filled poem.
I hope your ok hun. And it's true. In a way all the people who can relate to your work feel a little better that they are not the only ones going through this. But i wish you didn't have to go through it cos i don't think you deserve it..
5/5 as always hun
*Gem*

If this is true...that is really screwed up! i konw how you feel just different sides of a relation ship...i hope you pull through this