A victim of love

by Karl Wild GG23   Nov 19, 2006


I was once a victim of love,
And a broken heart,
Knew that love was out to get me,
From the very start.

Love pretended to be my friend,
And always have my back,
But what I cannot comprehend,
Is why love suddenly chose to attack.

Attack my innocent heart,
When it was weak and unsuspecting,
Tore my chest apart,
When it was supposed to be protecting.

To my surprise love let me down,
When I thought I knew it well,
Left me for dead in heartbreak town,
A place much worse then hell.

I now know love's not a friend,
But the devil in disguise,
A friend I do not recommend,
But one I do despise.

I have been once a victim of love,
And pray it's never twice,
Because when push comes to shove,
With love, you pay the ultimate price.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Good poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Spirit

    Good
    reminds me of a song i heard a long time ago
    Heartbreak hotel
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Wow another great poem that i can relate to
    "love is something that burns with passion but if your not careful you can get burned" this is a great piece

    laura

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    "I now know love's not a friend
    But the devil in disguise
    A friend I do not recommend
    But one I do despise"

    I love that stanza!!!
    Great read!
    5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Oh man, this one is definitely true. I am a victim right now. I've been a victim all my life. Even when it seems to be working out, one small slip, and it ends. Then you go back to being the victim. Oh man.. good stuff.. lol