by Gary Jurechka Nov 19, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
Death sits across |
by silvershoes
I love the bittersweet aftertaste of this poem. Great writing, you have some powerful ideas wrapped up in a simple message :) |
by Amy
What an amazing use of a metaphor! It gives such a deep meaning. And I mean, using a t-shirt as their metaphor, not many people could do what you did with this poem! |
This one is brilliant, I can't find words to explain how much I like it. It leaved me speechless. |
Thanks for the comment, Mike, but I must say I still believe, despite society-that we are always free-to be, do, feel and choose whatever our hearts tell us if we but listen. |
by Nada
Powerful =) |