First Love

by TheRevelation   Nov 19, 2006


Trapping me with your gaze,
But not even knowing your name,
Trapping me with your words,
But not one of them I heard,

For my heart was beating to loud,
I will love him forever I vowed,
My eyes shined with a unspoken love,
He was better then I could ever dream of,

He was popular sweet and most of all mine,
Our relationship is nothing you could define,
We twisted our hands in the hallway,
The day was brighter with him even on a rainy day,

He is my one and only love forever till death,
We will be together until our last breath,
For he is more than love to me he is my friend,
Love is something that I finally comprehend.

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  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Aw that was so sweet - its the best when u find love anyway great poem beautifully written once again! keep it up xx

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Very sweet poem...i liked your last line.
    Charisma*

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Aww, That was a very sweet and loving poem you have written here. You had a good flow and your choice of wording was good too! You've got talent as a writer, keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie

  • 18 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    I HAVE A L0VE LiKE THiS! THiS iS GREAT && i CAN T0TALLY RELATE T0 THiS!

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