by TheRevelation Nov 19, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
first love
Trapping me with your gaze, |
by dora
Aw that was so sweet - its the best when u find love anyway great poem beautifully written once again! keep it up xx |
by *Charisma*
Very sweet poem...i liked your last line. |
by Stephanie
Aww, That was a very sweet and loving poem you have written here. You had a good flow and your choice of wording was good too! You've got talent as a writer, keep it up! 5/5 |
I HAVE A L0VE LiKE THiS! THiS iS GREAT && i CAN T0TALLY RELATE T0 THiS! |