Comments : First Love

  • 18 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    I HAVE A L0VE LiKE THiS! THiS iS GREAT && i CAN T0TALLY RELATE T0 THiS!

    [{[{SHELBY}]}]

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Aww, That was a very sweet and loving poem you have written here. You had a good flow and your choice of wording was good too! You've got talent as a writer, keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Very sweet poem...i liked your last line.
    Charisma*

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Aw that was so sweet - its the best when u find love anyway great poem beautifully written once again! keep it up xx