Chaotic Mind

by Brittney Follett   Nov 19, 2006


Chaotic Mind

Silent screams and unshed tears,
Chaotic thoughts and untold fears.
Secrets hidden throughout the years,
Deadly scars and broken mirrors.

Perfectly painted death-filled dreams,
Hidden behind her hollow screams,
Smells of all her twisted lies,
Horrific paintings start to arise.

Blood filling every pore,
Blinding pain like never before,
A tortured heart cries in pain,
A penetrating scream of the insane.

Cruel actions decorate her skin.
Fighting a battle, no one can win,
Whispering wishes, no one can hear,
Chaotic smiles start to appear.

Bloody cuts, a broken soul,
A Chaotic Mind has no control.
Hysterical screams pierce the silence,
Reality gone, thoughts of violence.

Chaotic mind, no memory,
Only one thought of a remedy.
Lovely gun, you're so kind,
Tragic end of a Chaotic Mind.

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hehe I got a comment about these lines:
Secrets hidden throughout the years.
Deadly scars and broken mirrors.

They said years and mirrors doesnt rhyme, yeah if you say it differentlly than I do. I say mirrors like -me-ears and others pronounce it me-yours and it doesnt rhyme. My bad, just pointing that out! Hope you liked it!

I give credit to another poet on this site for inspiring me to write this

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  • 13 years ago

    by Koriey Korrupted

    I believe this poem grasps the true concept and emotional undercurrent of those who have fallen victim to depression. (including myself, thanks for sharing) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by amber

    How anyone could rate this poem less than a 5 are crazy!!! these are the best use of words i've read in a LONG time! you're amazing. Great job. :)
    thanks
    ~*~Amber~*~

  • 17 years ago

    by musiqlover015

    Wow... i terribly amazed... i'm astounded, it feels like you've taken my twisted thoughts and put them in print... i could never get that far... this is amazing

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow, I think WOW. Great poem, you created amazing atmosphere and imagery is great. Emotions are also excellently expressed. Wording of this piece is powerful and this one has haunting rhythm. I like it very much, your work is refreshing. It deserves 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, another amazing one. I can relate to it. Truly greatly written poem, with excellent choice of words and good flow.
    My favorite stanza is:
    -Silent screams and unshed tears,
    Chaotic thoughts and untold fears.
    Secrets hidden throughout the years,
    Deadly scars and broken mirrors.-

    You created great imagery in it.

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