by Stephanie
Speechless. Absolutely speechless. Wow, that was just incredible. No other words for it! The imagery of this poem was amazing and the flow was perfect. You're a very talented writer and it couldn't be any better. And I agree with her this has to be one of your best poems EVER! :) Great job, this one was really a pleasure to read. 5/5 Keep it up! |
Great poem, I read it twice. I liked the romanticizing of the gun. 5/5 |
by Tripp
Bloody cuts, a broken soul. |
by Tripp
Bloody cuts, a broken soul. |
Amazing poem!! I love the rhyme, it doesn't seem forced at all---The beginning pulls you into the poem right away and the ending wraps it up well! The flow is flawless and the emotional depth is great! Keep writing 5/5 =D |
by ForeverYoung
Yay, you put it on! its brilliant, really really good! |
by LadyPearl
Nice job. It had the right emotions for an effective read. The only is that mirror doesn't rhyme with years. Keep it up |
by Robie Lincer
Great job on this one... |
Hey, wonderful poem!!!!! Great rhyming and the metre works really well! I really love the last stanza, it finishes of the poem on a great note! |
by DarkJem
Excellent poem :) |
by Darien
Great poem! The rhymes were a bit, confusing. You seemed to have a very unusal rhyme scheme. I have an idea why, but I don't want to give you too much credit yet, since I have never read your poetry before. But I must say I am indeed impressed by this poem. The language and rhetorical devices used were excellent. So this was well done! Keep on writing! |
by Carmen
Wow... amazing description. its so descriptive, and it rhymed so well. amazing 5/5 |
by Amberinaa
Wow, what else is there to say everyone has said everything ITS AMAZING. The words the flow the rhymes! everything just fits together, it truly is a masterpiece!! |
by Mark
A good poem and a great flow used in it. Overall, I really liked it. |
by Katlynn
Wow, this is very beautiful written && very out of the ordinary of writing it so great job. |
by Jackie Marie
Wow. I had images going through my head the whole time I read this!! You did a wonderful job on this and I am definiatly going to give you the 5/5 that you deserve. The flow was perfect. |
This poem is one of the best ive ever read! and ive read thousands! keep up the good work ur doin great!! |
by Shinae
This is an amazing piece of work. I would be thanking {murder} for encouraging you to put it on as well. The personification throughout the whole thing was amazing - the Chaotic Mind came not only a state but a character. Loved it - will definately be adding you to my favourties list! |
by Amaya
Wow. I'm speachless. This was a truly amazing poem! Everything rhymed and went together. Excellent work in this poem. |
by Christie
Wow, love this poem. |