This is a very nice poem, it makes us remember to treasure each day with the ppl we love. wll done 5/5

Omgoodness that is totally sad but also sweet! keep writing! u hav sum skillz there :)

Fantastic poem huni,you to have talent .thankyou very much for your comments.i apprecialte it so much xx

This.poem.is.cool.btw.i.am.putting.a.fullstop.between.each.word.cuz.im.at.school.and.the.spacebar.isn't.working.lol.anyway.i.love.this.poem.and.i.hope.that.it.isnt.true.if.it.is.i.am.sorry.you.and.him.had.to.go.htrough.that.i.lost.a.friend.....

anyway.good.read.5/5.and.thanks.for.the.poem.comment.hun.

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This is awfully sad...but so beautifully written!...lovely work!...m sorry if it's true....u've put in emotions into this which make it look even powerful!!......kp up de good wrk!
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Oh my? such a beautiful poem! this is simply amazing! well done! Very emotional! flow was bit off but this was such a great poem! well penned keep writing! I enjoyed this poem! :) 5/5!

Hey great poem i think its great just the way it is i dnt think u need to improve
thanks for the comment on my poem.
keep up the good writeing

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Wow. Your best friend got shot? I'm so sorry. And apparentally your best friend is the guy you love too isn't it. That happened to me once.

Hey man this is a great poem i give a thumbs up i am new but wow it is good get a little more rythm in there and it would be a great poem

Great poem, in places it flow but not in others so you could improve on that, But your really good anyway 5/5