The Evil in my Veins

by Bradley Peter   Nov 19, 2006


A train wreck inside of me
Whom can stop it now
A disaster destined to be
So unstoppable somehow

No hero from dark space
No savior of my soul
Dismay and dark embrace
Loses me my control

Evil swims inside my veins
Turning love to hate
Scrubbing at instant stains
I understand my fate

Swirling deep into the eye
Of the monster from within
I lay my head to die
And release all my sin

    report violation
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  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is me all the time. Trying to be good but evil is always gnawing. Great write. Added to faves.

    • 7 years ago

      by Bradley Peter

      Reading it now - another poem I'd completely forgotten, but rather enjoyed - it could easily be understood as a mortal becoming a vampire. Thank you, Mel

  • 15 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    Again nice flow. Your the simplicity of the words you use make the poem even more powerful. I liked that a few of the lines were monosyllabic too :).

  • 18 years ago

    by bubbles

    Wow! that was really good...nice use of your emotions.keep up you good work..5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by anna

    I can relate. great job i could feel your emotion and the pome flowed freely. keep up the awsome job =)

  • 18 years ago

    by ellewen

    I can understand it. I have been there. You almost took those words from my mouth they are the equivilent to what I am going through. Its nice to know someone else has been there too.

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