I can understand it. I have been there. You almost took those words from my mouth they are the equivilent to what I am going through. Its nice to know someone else has been there too.

I can relate. great job i could feel your emotion and the pome flowed freely. keep up the awsome job =)

Wow! that was really good...nice use of your emotions.keep up you good work..5/5!

Again nice flow. Your the simplicity of the words you use make the poem even more powerful. I liked that a few of the lines were monosyllabic too :).

This is me all the time. Trying to be good but evil is always gnawing. Great write. Added to faves.