by Lauren Waszkiewicz Nov 20, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Every argument, Every lie |
by David
I like how in your para you used awake and asleep, shows how well you can write. this was an enjoyable poem to read. bravo. clap clap. |
by amoxi
Theres some conflict in this one but it was well written i liked it |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Brilliant. |
by Jenni Marie
I think the wording you used in this was beautiful. |
by Tara Kay
Well, i did like this one. it was long and didn't keep me interested enough but i loved the lines |