I like this poem. I think that the structure and word conten

I submited that last comment befor I was done so yah here is the rest of it.
good word content for this type of poem and it has a good flow to it. 5/5. Keep up the good work. :)

This was sad, but very good. You had quite a few mistakes, especially where apostrophes should have been (e.g. when writing 'she's' etc.) You should watch out for that. With a bit of touching up this would be excellent. The rhyming was good and it flowed nicely.

Good work.

Lish poem
i love the
"and she knows it" at the end
v good touch !!!!
mexxxx

This was a sad poem, I know there are a lot of teens like this, who just lose it. Good job on this one.

Well, i did like this one. it was long and didn't keep me interested enough but i loved the lines
"her heart's collapsing in on itself
her souls wasting away..."
they were really powerful.
well done

I think the wording you used in this was beautiful.
The flow threw me off at times though.
Apart from that, I think you did a wonderful job.

Brilliant.

takes away a pieces of her...grammatical error.

5/5

Theres some conflict in this one but it was well written i liked it

I like how in your para you used awake and asleep, shows how well you can write. this was an enjoyable poem to read. bravo. clap clap.

5/5 from me. David