Comments : The Beginning

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Cute poem, girl. Really nice. Great rhyming as usual, flow was off a bit though. Take care!

  • 18 years ago

    by LiveForHim

    Wow...i think i feel a teardrop coming..
    (^_^) im playin...but your poems are wonderful as always! keep writing.
    hugs -n- kisses 4 ya ***muah***