I Dare You ToTry

by Bloody Chocolate x Hopeless Romantic   Nov 20, 2006


Cut deep in me like a dagger
so realistic but with no pain
bury your fears in my soul
make me feel the pain i told
scowl at me and let me know
what you think i feel
what you say i deserve
(your lies unveiled)
shoot me death glares
so i'll laugh
make me smile
(what a coward)
feed me lies about my past
and you'll see my revenge, atlast
taste the tears
you say i knew so well
taste the fear
of my life your hell
so cut me and you'll bleed
and maybe you'll see
the pain i feel
is as real to you as can be.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Whew. Well, you had some very strong emotions being portrayed in this poem here! The flow was good and your choice of wording was good too. 5/5 You're a really good writer, keep it up!

    Stephanie

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