I love this style and you perfected it, great job, keep it up!! 5/5!!!

Bryan,

Sweety. i seen that on the news and as soon as i seen it i thought about you and i cried with yoou.. even tho i wasnt there.

An unusual poem, but it was neatly done with the sentences flowing in and out of the main letters down the side. Good job!
I think this is my 4th comment!
Charisma*