"I try to focus on something else,
But in the end I only fail.
I would rather think of you,
Then let my mind just take sail."

This was a really good concept and you have some interesting imagery in this piece!
Keep it up, it's fun to read!
5/5
*Gem*

Cheers for the comment.
I like this poem of yours. I can really relate to it =)
5/5
Marcus

I really like this poem keep writing i really like your work

-sda-

A job well done with this piece I must say! You have got an excellent meaning and story behind this poem!! I loved the ending stanza it brought everything together....great write, we enjoyed!
Krissey