Unfit.

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Nov 20, 2006


Unfit.

She slams the bottle down as she looks into the mirror,
Empty pill bottles scattered all across her floor -
The distorted face staring back at her shudders a deep breath.
Maniacal laughter cracks up and down her spine,
As blood splatters onto the floor from a weakened wrist -
This is not the good-bye she had hoped for.

© Jenna Elphick
November 19, 2006

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  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I'm not a person for poems on cutting....but it was unusual and well done for a non-rhyming poem, just depressing, and sad that the girl portrayed here does that to herself. It's so scary, and can cause death at anytime....
    Charisma*

  • 18 years ago

    by Bryan

    Short and sad but good, keep it up, 5/5!!! great job jenna.

    Bryan,

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