Aww, its sweet and soooo sad! Makes me wanna cry. Blondie you have an awesome vocabulary, and great writing skills, I think I like that last part the best, great job!

5/5

I don't know how this doesn't have more votes or comments. This was amazing!! It made me want to cry. It reminded me so much of me and my grandmother. You don't even know...i can't even explain myself! Lol. I loved this!!! And like Elijah said...this was really unique...not just the idea of the poem but the way you wrote it. Never stop!!!! Take care,

-Liz

Great poem. With good word choice and full of filling. Keep up the good work. 5/5

This was a smashing piece of work lol, (I really don’t talk like that)
Very nice poem

if you don’t mind, please read/rate my new poem “Classic Love Song”
If you comment I will return the favor, thanks

!!! that poem was very nice and I enjoyed reading it
Its poems like these that make me happy I happened to come upon them
Great job and keep writing porfavor (please, haha)

If you could please read/rate my poem Classic Love Song, I appreciate it
I return the favor if you comment back

Wow. soo powerful! you are ever gifted!
xo