Very sad indeed. I liked this, but it was a bit on the short and straight-to-the-point side. I think you could have expanded it and maybe put in some different words to really help to convey your emotions.

Good work, anyway.

Very good poem. I only wish that it was a little longer. 5/5

That was pretty good. i guess im more of a rhyming poetry fan, but i'll still comment on this one.... actually i liked that this one didnt rhyme (kind of an oxymoron), because with poems that are meant to be deep and soul seeking, you just gotta lay your feelings out, and not worry about the rhyming. SO the poem.. the flow was fairly good, just the last bit was kind of longer than the rest. but otherwise... um, i liked how you ended it, the starting and the ending are extremely important in poems. SO 5/5 for this one.