Comments : Moment of Truth

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Another amazing delivery... I can really relate to the content and feelings of this outstanding poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Really well done Noni!..
    I'm sure a lot of people can relate to this one. Keep on writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This one is a deep one that touched me from the first stanza, great job once again.......
    Noni ur the best. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Excellent! I favor rhyming myself, but you pulled it off very nicely. Amazing Job! I love these stanzas:

    I've began to realize now
    Though I dream to belong
    I've fallen in love with sorrow
    It's been with me all along

    What's wrong with me God
    Is darkness so wrong
    Is numbness so hard
    Is it's touch so strong

    That even though I help others
    I still remain deep in the shadows
    Drinking the nectar of pain
    Unable for me to let go

    Maybe add some puncuation?

    Excellent
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this, it was very touching and sad.
    I enjoyed the imagery and wording particuarly, and I liked the flow and rhyme scheme.

    My favourite line was 'I've fallen in love with sorrow.'

  • 18 years ago

    by Predictable Suicide

    NICE!
    amazing poem amazing message and amazing feeling
    i love it

  • 18 years ago

    by Queen of the Damned

    That's a terrific poem. I like this one the best. I like Linkin Park also!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I can relate. I wish I had thought of this poem. I hope to see more of your poems soon.5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Apie

    This is a nice piece- so many people can relate to this including me :) its nice to see it written down in this way, you can feel the emotion. i really love the line about falling in love with sorrow- so simple yet beautiful. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by DarkJem

    Wow great poem shows a lot of feeling keep it up :) 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jade Eyes

    WOW!!!!!thats how I feel...how is that ppl can always put into words how I feel...Beautiful...utterly gorgeous(spelt it wrong I think LOL)...keep writing...check out my stuff sum time plz...I hope you like them...but yea...wonderfully written!!!!!!!!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by _Giving Up_

    AMAZING!!! i absolutely love this poem... the words you descibe me perfectly, and i'm sure many people can relate! Keep up the great work and check out mine sometime!!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by bleed4eternity

    You did a great job writing this peom, it is one of the best that i have read

  • 17 years ago

    by Sean Lawson

    Awsome, I can really relate to the third and fifth stanzas. Hope you come up with more like this.