Awh, don't know why this has such a bad rating sweetie. It's really cuuutte. I loved the descriptions you used although a little more detail could have gone into them. The flow was good and you did a good job! Nicely done, 5/5

Short and sweet :] Very cute.. Well done xx

Cute. and im not really into the whole following a criteria but u did so well i think. keep it up,
thx for ur comments,

love ya lots,
sore

I've never seen a poem like this before. You make it look easy
And you did it justice =)
Just beautiful..
5/5
*Gem*

A great Pleiades with great emotion showen, usually writers get lost when trying to write for a style rather than the feelings, but you did it, and did it perfectly. 5/5