Comments : Please Forgive Me.

  • I Love Poems Like This! I Can Relate To What Your Saying In Every Stanza, I Love God But I Know I Mess Up Alot, And This Is Exactly How I Feel Twards Him & What I Want To Say =)

    Your Good, But I'm Sure You Know That
    5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I really love how heartfelt this is. Great job! Your phrasiology is unique and cool too. Keep it up! And congrats on placing in the contest!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I'm not religious at all...but this has to be one of my favourite poems that I have read on the site...so beautiful and moving, and I liked how it was filled with both despair and hope at the same time.
    The only thing I could suggest on this is to try and eliminate some of the fillers (I, and, you etc) to make the flow absolutely flawless.
    My favourite part of this would be the final stanza, it hit me hard and the last line made me smile.