Comments : Eros!

  • 17 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    Eros, let my heart be!
    This love is slowly killing me
    I'm poisoned by it's toxic taste
    My sanity I've put to waste
    To let you go is tearing me apart
    There's nothing left to break, I lost my heart

    I thought this was very good. Short but sweet.

    It flows good. except the last line it breaks the flow up..

    Good job. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Chemistry

    Short but straight to the point :) I like it ^_^ 5/5