U were right sis i only read the beginning. all ur poems r depressing please write more about zombies please please please.

Okay, this is going to sound weird, but sometimes I'm not sure which one life is. Fantasy or reality. Like, we could all be in someone else's dream and when they wake up, we die. Do you ever think about that? Sorry. Anyway, I LOVE this poem. It was beautifully written and the word choice was good. 5/5

I much preffered the theme and content of this poem to the rhyme. the rhyme seemed a bit forced but otherwise it was a good poem.

love under will
rocky

I loved it. . .Nothing else to say

Laura
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