I love the ending "and then I wonder why I wondered" it is perfect and the questions really make you think about the why of the things mentioned in the verses, altogether an amazing work

This for me is one of your more " complete" "put-togather" works, not that all our others weren't, because they were and they were good but this one really sticks with me

it's smooth, and the rythem and rhyme is great, it really flows for me

I can't think of anything that sticks out as a suggestion to change, it's all good for me.

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Someones Mighty Inquizative!

there are a lot of lines I can personally relate to, they were well worded..

I agree this poem is a different take on your usual style, and personally i found this easier to read, but thats my personal bais =/

Well done girllie, I will comment on more poems soon *hearts*