by Gem Nov 20, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
I feel myself falling |
Excellent vocabulary here and again great job avoiding clicheswith this kinda things it hard but WELL DONE |
by Kelly
You did your best....? Well i have to say your best was amazing. Such a great poem. I cant believe you wrote this from just a title. Absolute talent at its height. |
Hope you won the contest...thsi was really very unique...i mean the way this all was presented...so many poems are there on nightmares...but i really liked this one |
by kiara
This is great lol i bet you won, if you didnt something must be seriously wrong with those ppl lol |
by Jen
Awww wow i loved that it flowed beautifully and the rhyme scheme was great woo go gem =]=]=]=] |