Comments : Execrated Lips

  • 18 years ago

    by Jen

    Awww wow i loved that it flowed beautifully and the rhyme scheme was great woo go gem =]=]=]=]

    ~*~Jen~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by kiara

    This is great lol i bet you won, if you didnt something must be seriously wrong with those ppl lol

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hope you won the contest...thsi was really very unique...i mean the way this all was presented...so many poems are there on nightmares...but i really liked this one

    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Kelly

    You did your best....? Well i have to say your best was amazing. Such a great poem. I cant believe you wrote this from just a title. Absolute talent at its height.

    Kelly
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Excellent vocabulary here and again great job avoiding clicheswith this kinda things it hard but WELL DONE